Smoking Wheels
Forty passengers were evacuated from a Northwest jet yesterday after an airport official saw smoke coming from near the wheels of the plane.Northwest Flight 428 had just landed at the LaCrosse, Municipal Airport in Wisconsin, following a flight from Minneapolis yesterday when the plume of smoke was spotted. All 40 passengers were evacuated safely. The cause of the smoke is still unknown.
A 7-year-old boy who was missing for three years was found Monday night in Brick Township, N.J. after a neighbor altered the police. The boy's mother has been arrested and faces charges in conjunction with the kidnapping.
1 comment:
1) Don't start a sentence with a numeral -- write it out (e.g., Fifteen not 15).
Say the official "saw" smoke, not detected it. (I'm assuming he saw it from afar, which is not detection.) You don't need to repeat the info about the smoke in P2.
2) Good job.
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